When I was young,
Oh, when I was young...
Everything was so much fun.
Had no dreams,
had no pun,
but oh, it was so much fun.
The hugs from mama,
learning skates,
learning to ride a bicycle
and the dance with papa.
The fights with di
and the games too..
Telling on her to mom and dad,
and the midnight stories too..
No cellphone, no wifi,
Even the cable was out,
Had a playground, had a school,
and there was plenty happiness, no doubt
There were friends,
who brought plenty smiles
Them, I still dream of,
After the closing of blinds...
And now,
Oh its still good,,
With the new world around..
but the old days,
I will always miss their sound.
Oh, when I was young...
Everything was so much fun.
Had no dreams,
had no pun,
but oh, it was so much fun.The hugs from mama,
learning skates,
learning to ride a bicycle
and the dance with papa.
The fights with di
and the games too..
Telling on her to mom and dad,
and the midnight stories too..
No cellphone, no wifi,
Even the cable was out,
Had a playground, had a school,
and there was plenty happiness, no doubt
There were friends,
who brought plenty smiles
Them, I still dream of,
After the closing of blinds...
And now,
Oh its still good,,
With the new world around..
but the old days,
I will always miss their sound.
This was so beautiful ! Loved it ! ❤️
ReplyDeleteThank you so much <3
DeleteSimple and beautiful!👌
ReplyDeleteOne of the best part of this poem is your changing poetic format : sometimes aaba,abcb and so on!It keeps the values of the poem intact!
Thank you :)
DeleteNostalgic one!
ReplyDeleteGood writing, simple and sober. Makes one nostalgic :)
ReplyDelete:)
DeleteBeautiful.....👌👌
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